My name is Mani and I am going to be joining you on the Summer Learning Journey as a blog commenter. I am so excited that you are joining us for the Summer Learning Journey 2019-2020.
This year I am so excited that I get to read over the Manaiakalani blogs, especially because I have visited a few of the schools in your cluster. I am really looking forward to summer, aren't you? In my spare time I like spending time with my family and hanging out with my friends. I also love to exercise and write songs in my spare time. What do you like to do in your spare time?
Congratulations on completing your first activity of the Summer Learning journey! I really like the way you have set out your writing and made a proper list. I am super impressed that you have included reasons why you would take the food. By adding some bright colours or a few pictures of the food items to your blog post I think it would really catch people’s attention.
I look forward to reading more of your blog posts Pitara, Happy posting! :)
Hi, my name is Gammado from Wesley Primary School. I really like how you are so specific and how your writing is so colorful but have in mind that with some colors you can't see what you are writing.
Kia ora Pitara,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Mani and I am going to be joining you on the Summer Learning Journey as a blog commenter. I am so excited that you are joining us for the Summer Learning Journey 2019-2020.
This year I am so excited that I get to read over the Manaiakalani blogs, especially because I have visited a few of the schools in your cluster. I am really looking forward to summer, aren't you? In my spare time I like spending time with my family and hanging out with my friends. I also love to exercise and write songs in my spare time. What do you like to do in your spare time?
Congratulations on completing your first activity of the Summer Learning journey! I really like the way you have set out your writing and made a proper list. I am super impressed that you have included reasons why you would take the food. By adding some bright colours or a few pictures of the food items to your blog post I think it would really catch people’s attention.
I look forward to reading more of your blog posts Pitara, Happy posting! :)
Nga mihi,
Mani
Hi, my name is Gammado from Wesley Primary School. I really like how you are so specific and how your writing is so colorful but have in mind that with some colors you can't see what you are writing.
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